C O M I N G
Borrowed Dreams
Epic American Historical Novel
HOLLYWOOD GATEWAY SCREENPLAY COMPETITION
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WHITE SHADOWS, BLACK DREAMS
By JUSTIN SWINGLE
Now Adapted Into the Epic Novel Borrowed Dreams
WHITE SHADOWS, BLACK DREAMS is an extraordinary accounting of African-American life at the turn of the 20th Century written in epic form. It's the classic story of triumphing over insurmountable odds to wealth, prosperity, leadership and independence. The formula has been attempted many times, but rarely does the storytelling transcend from telling the overwhelming story to taking the audience on the journey along with the central character. WHITE SHADOWS, BLACK DREAMS is in the company of THE COLOR PURPLE and ROOTS.
There is no question the writer knows the craft of screenwriting screenplays. The research and detail by the writer shows a strong grasp of the subject matter. The structure is solid, yet enormous. The concept and story ideas are compelling. All of the plot lines are well defined and hone to a fine tune.
The dialogue and main characters really make the script sing. The writer has a knack for dialect and is consistent throughout the script. The characters are real and very human, especially SARAH.
WHITE SHADOWS, BLACK DREAMS is a female star vehicle that could showcase true depth of human emotion and adversity and at the same time provides enormous amounts of dramatic action. There are several pivotal supporting roles that lends to having a strong, powerful cast. By having made the story personal, the script connects to people through core societal values and belief systems.
The movie would appeal to women, African Americans and anyone that relates to the triumph of the spirit. It's a family movie with adult themes.
CHARACTERIZATION: EXCELLENT
DIALOGUE: EXCELLENT
STRUCTURE: VERY GOOD to EXCELLENT
STORY EXECUTION: VERY GOOD to EXCELLENT